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I look at you and I see
my awkward teenage years
the beginning days of
a date with my vices
one I shall always crave

I catch your scent
and my world turns
a little faster, but
time slows down like
a chronological prison

I feel your touch
and my skin prickles
I want more than just
a fleeting caress--
or a remembrance

I hear your voice
and I feel like a child
who knows poems
you were blessed with
a healing balm

I still can taste you
like a sun-ripened peach
juicy and sweet
dripping down my chin
and filling my senses

© 2009 John Hardesty
©2009 =Corvidae65
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Author's Comments

Sometimes, I just shouldn't look at that old highschool yearbook. I only have the one and I always seek out her picture...

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:iconzanasoul:
Lovely writing John, intense feelings : )

And i can just say i almost get the same feeling when i look thru my old yearbook.


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:iconalecbell:
Sweetly written, John.

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:iconcorvidae65:
Syrupy? Gads! :omg: I hope not :D

Thanks Alec :)

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:iconcorvidae65:
Thank you Suzana :aww:

i think it's a universal thing--I only get melancholic when I look at her picture though :D

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:icondavincipoppalag:
VEry evocative John.. we all have a picture like that someplace

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:iconzanasoul:
Hihi it sure is a unviersal thing :aww:

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:iconlindzgal:
This is sweet John . Such a tender write. I can see what you were like as a teenager. (and a man, now)

Love the last stanza!

Just lovely!

Linda
:icondwk61:
I can identify with this John, however:


I grow old … I grow old …
I shall wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled.

Shall I part my hair behind? Do I dare to eat a peach?
I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each.
:iconjonnygoodboy:
Love this mate :heart:

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:iconfrazzled-mage:
yes john. just yes.

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